Dear Alice
● I think we should get a class pet because I think we deserve it and I think we could
gain up our responsibility by looking after the/our class pet.
● I think the options of the class of the pet should be:
❏ Fish (maybe a goldfish)
❏ Guinea Pig
❏ Budgie
❏ Mice
● So looking after the class pet the person that gets pep or you think that is
responsible and reliable and definitely deserves it could take home the class pet
home for the weekend (if that was ok with the parents of course I know mine
would!!!)
Yours sincerely, Emily T
Thank you Emily for your persuasive letter. You have some good points and I like the strong vocabulary you have used like 'reliable', and 'definately deserves.' Reread your sentences to make sure they make sense, check for full stops and commas. Can you mark your paragraphs with a space rather that a bullet point. Leave the bullet points in the list of pets. Good Job!
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